Unfortunate headlines

Gun violence presentation to be Friday following death of 5-year-old

 

And after that, a barbecue? Better check the menu.

Sentence structure and punctuation matter.

“Following death of 5-year-old, gun violence presentation to be Friday”

Looks like it’s going to be the usual “America has more gun violence than any other country we didn’t exclude because it has more.”

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